how to start a asian pakistani clothing business in london?
Hafsa Asked: how to start a asian pakistani clothing business in london?
i an living in london i want to start ready made pakistani and indian clothing business but want to start from home because i have not got any expirenceof seeling clothes before can some one help me what shuld i do to start a business from home?
my brother is in pakistan he can buy clothes and also designe and stitch for me but the problem is where shuld i sell the clothes.
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it is really good and i don't normally like reading so take it as a complement i want to read the resat of the story now to see if the dad comes back or what the wedding day is like you could send me the rest try and get it published
Just like every single other person on this site, you made these mistakes:
1. Grammatical errors
2. Grammatical errors everywhere
3. Passive voice
4. Redundancies: Just by Ctrl + F for 'LY' I found like 6 earlies in the same paragraph. Wtf?
5. Weak verbs
6. Weak verbs (repeated for emphasis, just like the grammar thing.)
6. Telling instead of showing
7. Grammatical errors…all over the place. If you don't believe me, take a look at this:
It's the same with breakfast, however the last stunt I pulled in the kitchen made it look like my family were celebrating Bonfire Night early, but still it's so much more satisfying knowing your Mum poured the milk into your bowl of cereal.
Holy freaking crap. Wtf is this? Were you trying to be serious with this? Jesus Christ, please google the definition of a run on sentence.
8. Sucky flow
9. The fact that you 'just wrote this when you got bored'.
That should pretty much sum everything up into a nice package that will convey my annoyance towards you and anyone else who just writes garbage when they're bored.
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